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 meela
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  Posted 10/07/2006 08:20:49 PM
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The words
came to me
falling through
verillium skies
into a space
where the
master
lives
two
in
1
yes in this dull, ordinary state
- longing for the true brilliance
1
to
two
three
and four
the words
moving fast
decide what's
going out this
door. i sure
dig it - i
dig the
shape
i am
in.
i
do



Twitching like a finger
On the trigger of a gun
Leaving nothing but the dead and dying ...Back in my little town

Paul Simon

 CallofZion
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  Posted 10/07/2006 10:08:11 PM
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Meela, I love this one. You have a very distinct, esoteric style. Is there a significance to the numbers in this poem? We are having a discussion on my forum abour "sacred numbers," and the idea of 1 expressing unity and 2 duality has come up in my readings on the subject.      

 meela
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  Posted 10/07/2006 11:16:46 PM
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The significance of the numbers is unifying the duality of a mind where the imagination has been an outcaste, abandoned or treated as an unwanted entity in a creative person's life.  Thanks for pointing that out the symbolism of the numbers to me.  

It's esoteric because I was focused on creating some sort of shape, as well as saying - hopefully - something that was making sense.  

--Last edited by meela on 2006-07-10 23:37:51 --


Twitching like a finger
On the trigger of a gun
Leaving nothing but the dead and dying ...Back in my little town

Paul Simon


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